Vash, Kyou, and Slink

This is Vash, Kyou, and Slink, the three demons of mine with pure demon blood. But, guess what... Vash and Kyou have their hearts again!

A third of each of their hearts were in three people that meants the most.
Vash: Slink (him, being the third in line and the only one to keep his heart, is obvious), Light Ansem, and within a locket that was once his lover before he lost his heart, Nilynn.
Kyou: Slink (obvious), Dark Ansem, and Fate (played by ~rubygirlrocks12, the first person to ever show him love).

Slink was dragged into a war, in which Kingdom Hearts (ONCE AGAIN! This is the fourth time we've... meaning, me and Beth, have done something like this!) was being opened. A girl named Zi (if I didn't spell that right, Beth, sue me. xD) gathered up some demon-hunters, due to the fact that demons destoryed her life. Turns out Kyou was one of them. Of course, Slink and his gang had to stop it. He and Kyou both had to, since Zi had taken control of Hollow Bastion in Kyou's abscene. One of the demon-hunters, Nikki (who had a crush on Cami and also got her pissed off easily in the past, due to the fact that she didn't want to admit that she had a crush on him) was accetped to the group by Slink.

Darkness was spreading through the worlds quickly, and it was affecting Kyou, who was still merged with Slink, greatly, hence Slink was blacking out alot and not remembering what would happen. He had to retire his leadership down to his right-hand(or, more say, left-hand) person, Cami. Being a former leader, she didn't feel right having the position back. The rest of the group was relived when Slink regained it. Having lack of sleep and spent most of his nights training mentally with Kyou, they both become strong enough to end it.

Slink confronted Zi, and they fought. While they fought, Kindgom Hearts was opened. Cuz who was behind the doors and pressumingly dead? Vash! Kyou regained his body and approached his appentice (Zi) after Slink had knocked her down. Stabbing her in the back, she faded, but hadn't died.

Kyou left Slink to fight on his own, and Zi had advanced on Slink. She kissed him, and while she did, stole his heart, locking it in a locket. He collapsed, and the rest of the group was in shock. As Zi walked away, she said "And STAY dead!" ...Until they all heard a raspy breathing sound (kinda like Kayako's croak, but more silent and breathy). Slink rose, but in his demon stage. He never did this before when he lost his heart because the times before he didn't care. This time, he did. This had Zi backing up in a corner, terrifed. He approached and snatched the locket, releasing his and many other hearts. He collasped to the ground again, recalling what happened. While doing so, Zi bolted. Slink glared after her and quickly ran after her.

Once he caught up to her, he explioted her fears; herself and Kyou. Finding this out, Slink mentally called on Kyou to come, and he gladly did. Slink summoned a mirror with his Shadow element, and someone wrapped his arms around her with his sword poised at her neck. Yup, Kyou. Her reflection in the mirror began to come towards her and she freaked. She was killed then.

Slink knew what he had to do; seal Kingdom Hearts. After talking to Dark Fate, who was on the other side (Vash wasn't, he got out), he had Sora seal the doors. Soro guided the group to Castle Oblivion so they could meet Fate and Namine. Kyou left them to go back to Hollow Bastion, and so did Fate. Slink wanted to go pay a visit to his old home, and Dark (Ansem, also considered Slink's father) came with him. They found Kyou, now with a third of his heart back. Later on, Dark and Fate gave him back the other two pieces, and he became whole again. Slink accetped him and Fate into the group. Though it may take forever for him to be forgiven, and he is VERY sucidual and confused, he's still willing to stay with the group. Slink keeps him and Dark in line (and he's younger than both of them. xD). Kyou is in the middle, and that's how he currently looks.
The following day, Slink and Kyou were talking about Vash. They went to recover him, and he came very willingly. Beth, who had found a mysterous locket, is the reincarination of Vash former lover, Nilynn. A third of his heart was sealed in it. Beth opened it and it was released. Vash went to Light Ansem then on his own. While Kyou had Light seperated from Dark, Vash always spoke with Light Ansem. Once his heart become whole, he felt content.

There's some new things I want to point out.

Vash - Overall, he's new to all you guys. He's the first in line, and techicinally 2015 years old. xD;;; But, he's 15. He's about 5'5", weighs 134 lbs., and weilds a huge double-bladed/double-handled sword (as seen in pic.) He's rather silent, but he's more content and laid-back than the other two. He can turn into a fox. He's not into physical fighting; he's known for his speed and intellengce. He's rather cute, don't you think? xD

Kyou - He shrank a bit. Now he's 6'4", just an inch taller than Slink. (Beth, I know I said 6', but I changed my mind! xD). He's sucidual, and thinks he does deserve to die. Yet, he never knew WHY he was insane, and all he ever wanted was to be loved. He wanted his heart back. He's a VERY confused soul, and normally goes to Slink to talk to. And, I seriously love his outfit. xD I don't think I mentioned before, but he can turn into a wolf.

Slink - Look who got a haircut. xDD He even cut of his back (like I did). It's the same lenght as my new hairstyle, but his doesn't curl, it's straight. I know his head looks bigger than Kyou and Vash's so shut up. xD I love his new color scheme, don't you? xD And, yes, he's bored.

WELL!! This is long. xDD;;; Sorry about that, I just wanted to get all of it out. Beth, I know I let out the clones and all, but shut up about that! ...People, ignore that. xD

Critique Discouraged, please.

Time - 2 hours
Media - 0.5 lead and Prismacolor Verithin colored pencils

Vash, Slink, Kyou are Copyright to ~AxelVIII8913
That's the only copyright I'm doing. I'm tired. Shut up. xDD;;;